I'm loving the confidence in the line. By which I mean that I like how its not all super sketchy and your lines are so precise. I would just say watch your anatomy and proportions!
Ivan, Good use of the surrounding environment of your subjects. Pages 1, 3 and 4 have the strongest character and interesting style. Look at the first 2 pages. See how you work towards the corners and leave the center part of the page ? Now look at the forth and fifth pages - see how a larger drawing and some environment gives the drawing context and can help with the story ? Try to be conscious of this in your drawings.
I'm loving the confidence in the line. By which I mean that I like how its not all super sketchy and your lines are so precise. I would just say watch your anatomy and proportions!
ReplyDeleteIvan,
ReplyDeleteGood use of the surrounding environment of your subjects. Pages 1, 3 and 4 have the strongest character and interesting style. Look at the first 2 pages. See how you work towards the corners and leave the center part of the page ?
Now look at the forth and fifth pages - see how a larger drawing and some environment gives the drawing context and can help with the story ? Try to be conscious of this in your drawings.