I love, love, love the environments in these sketches your subjects are on the page with purpose you can look at almost all of these and think park. well done
I agree. Great atmosphere. HAha well wait, the second guy in the first image... his background looks weird haha but all the others are VERY NICE. Especially the middle page. I would just suggest creating more of a internal structure in your people. I see that u use strong and final outlines, I cant complain cause I do the same thing hahah And I like the way it looks. BUT your figures have some strange anatomy, mainly the girl in the middle page. I think that if she had a internal structure, then she would have came out looking a little less wonky wonk wonk =] Hope that helps!!!!!
Ivan, The first and second pages are great. This is some of the best drawing work I've seen from you this semester. If there is an area where you should continue to work, it is in proportions and leaving a little space between overlapping limbs, objects and foreground/background relationships - the depth in your drawings will read better.
I love, love, love the environments in these sketches your subjects are on the page with purpose you can look at almost all of these and think park. well done
ReplyDeleteI agree. Great atmosphere. HAha well wait, the second guy in the first image... his background looks weird haha but all the others are VERY NICE. Especially the middle page. I would just suggest creating more of a internal structure in your people. I see that u use strong and final outlines, I cant complain cause I do the same thing hahah And I like the way it looks. BUT your figures have some strange anatomy, mainly the girl in the middle page. I think that if she had a internal structure, then she would have came out looking a little less wonky wonk wonk =] Hope that helps!!!!!
ReplyDeleteIvan,
ReplyDeleteThe first and second pages are great. This is some of the best drawing work I've seen from you this semester. If there is an area where you should continue to work, it is in proportions and leaving a little space between overlapping limbs, objects and foreground/background relationships - the depth in your drawings will read better.