Ivan, Much better, overall, than your work at the North Market. I like that you've used the railings as elements in your work. Try to commit to a straighter line. You can do this by going through the motion of drawing with a 'ghost stroke' before putting down the pen and making the mark. As with the North Market drawings, indicate faces more - it doesn't have to be too specific - but it gives an otherwise mannequin subject some individuality and life. Good variety of poses, by the way !
Ivan,
ReplyDeleteMuch better, overall, than your work at the North Market. I like that you've used the railings as elements in your work. Try to commit to a straighter line. You can do this by going through the motion of drawing with a 'ghost stroke' before putting down the pen and making the mark.
As with the North Market drawings, indicate faces more - it doesn't have to be too specific - but it gives an otherwise mannequin subject some individuality and life.
Good variety of poses, by the way !