Ivan, The amount of drawing here is good and I like that the types of poses you captured became more dynamic as you got more comfortable drawing the dancer. But look at your drawings - they all hug the contours of your figure. Work within the form and through the form. Also, you can still make indications of faces, hair and hands. Overall, please loosen up your line more. If you see the contour of a leg, make a mark that is the whole leg -- from the upper leg all the way down to the ankle and around the heel.
Ivan,
ReplyDeleteThe amount of drawing here is good and I like that the types of poses you captured became more dynamic as you got more comfortable drawing the dancer.
But look at your drawings - they all hug the contours of your figure. Work within the form and through the form. Also, you can still make indications of faces, hair and hands.
Overall, please loosen up your line more. If you see the contour of a leg, make a mark that is the whole leg -- from the upper leg all the way down to the ankle and around the heel.