Ivan, Good choices for your subjects but you're being too literal with your drawing of the subject. If you loosen up your line a little, consider how the pointing of a finger, pumping of a fist or a stance with a guitar can be accentuated through gesture. If the line gets too careful, it can make your drawing too stiff. Start lightly and loosely with a fluid line - not a short line.
Ivan,
ReplyDeleteGood choices for your subjects but you're being too literal with your drawing of the subject.
If you loosen up your line a little, consider how the pointing of a finger, pumping of a fist or a stance with a guitar can be accentuated through gesture. If the line gets too careful, it can make your drawing too stiff.
Start lightly and loosely with a fluid line - not a short line.