your proportions look good, the static poses are-Meh but the ones in motion are really interesting. I personally like the figure on ther first page with the arms in two different positions make me thing of a spider-man comic.
Ivan, There are drawings on every page that have good energy and a loose line. I get the feeling there would be more if you were to develop your drawing to a certain degree and then leave it alone. The dancer doing the splits in the 2nd page has a wonderful sense of form to it - there are others, as well. Try to remember that a more dynamic pose can help you achieve a more interesting drawing. Think about foreshortening and overlapping forms. I like the output here, too.
your proportions look good, the static poses are-Meh but the ones in motion are really interesting. I personally like the figure on ther first page with the arms in two different positions make me thing of a spider-man comic.
ReplyDeleteIvan,
ReplyDeleteThere are drawings on every page that have good energy and a loose line. I get the feeling there would be more if you were to develop your drawing to a certain degree and then leave it alone.
The dancer doing the splits in the 2nd page has a wonderful sense of form to it - there are others, as well. Try to remember that a more dynamic pose can help you achieve a more interesting drawing.
Think about foreshortening and overlapping forms.
I like the output here, too.