Ivan, Sorry for these comments coming so late. I really like the character you're creating with your drawings. I still would like you to loosen up and try not to create such a dark, even contour everywhere. Think about how line weight can be used to stress weight shift, overlapping forms and darker sides of a form. Also, you create very careful contours, yet you are still leaving features from the face. While I don't mind a simplified face (I prefer it, really) in comparison to the figure's detail, some of these faces are too simply drawn. Keep varying your poses. Good job.
Ivan,
ReplyDeleteSorry for these comments coming so late. I really like the character you're creating with your drawings. I still would like you to loosen up and try not to create such a dark, even contour everywhere. Think about how line weight can be used to stress weight shift, overlapping forms and darker sides of a form.
Also, you create very careful contours, yet you are still leaving features from the face. While I don't mind a simplified face (I prefer it, really) in comparison to the figure's detail, some of these faces are too simply drawn.
Keep varying your poses. Good job.